I think you should say instead of little black boys and little black girls and little white girls and little white boys. You should say White boys and girls and black boys and girls, because technically, they are the ones who were taught a valuable lesson and joined hands. Also it would be kind of offensive to refer them as "black". You should say African Americans instead. Other than that, your speech is great! My cl did an MLK writing for a contest! Awesome job!
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